...ok... a few things:
out of curiosity, why'd you delete the empty skills and change their order? Makes the sheet harder to read.
Your character isn't finished. You haven't picked a Darkling Kith. You haven't spent your three skill specialties.
Also, you've got Contracts a little messed up. Points are spent like when buying merits. By '5 dots in contracts', the game doesn't mean '5 dots in the various powers detailed in the contract section', it means 'five dots in the various named contracts, each new dot of which gives a new power'. Your contracts should read something like "Darkness **, Hearth *, Smoke **" instead of paying for each separate power.
Finally, it might be a good idea to come up with a name for your fake ID.